Today I had a group tutorial with Carol just before the easter break, this recording was going to be recorded so we can watch it over the break and make the necessary changes. I made a presentation showing carol the stage i am at now. I included all of my works and the research I have done I knew there was things I am missing as I wanted to get as much as feedback as possible. I made some layouts to show her the type of style I want to have, very delicate and modern influenced by the moodboards.
The group tutorial went well carol said she is really happy to see all of the research and evaluations I have made, she said needs to see breadth of ideas on visual language and layout sketches as experiment. She also said she wants to see home within home concept using either typography or photography. She said communicate the contrast so the reader can see it. She also said she wants to see a good grid system as I want to have delicate spacious system which means it needs to be tight grid. I knew all of this feedback would come as my visual language is not decided and i dont how much visuals yet so the next step is to create the visual style I want to and work on the feedback from carol.
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