This week we recieved our feedback for the type and image project. I’m really happy with the feedback. I was told to improve some areas in my project which I thought the same. David suggested to show some sketchbook work and sketches of layouts which will show that I didn’t just go straight into digitally creating the posters. I actually did loads of sketches in my sketchbook but didn’t think to add them to my blog posts. So, I added some screenshots from my sketchbook on to the blog post and spoke about how I sketched these earlier on in the project. The images below are screenshots of the posts I’ve done. They can be found in the type and image blog post as well.
In addition, the feedback stated that I should play around with some elements in the poster which some parts look like they’re floating and they look seperate. I agree with this feedback so I changed some text in the poster especially I think around the big Futurism title, the small texts feels so seperate from each other. I played around with the text near the large letters because they seemed seperate from each other I think now it looks lot better. Also, I had the feedback to check body copy so I had a look at them and tried get rid of any mistakes. Also, point size was mentioned so I played with small text and increased there size.
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